Monday, March 26, 2018

Appendix N Review: The Guns of Avalon




Released two years after Nine Princes in Amber, 1972's The Guns of Avalon (which is a stellar title, by the way) picks up where the first book left off. Corwin, recently escaped from brutal captivity in the dungeons of Amber, travels through shadow worlds to find his lost domain, Avalon. Or at least something close enough to it. Corwing needs two things to conquer Amber: an army, and guns that will work in Amber's magical environment.

He arrives in the land of Lorraine, a medieval kingdom close to Avalon and once ruled by a shadow of Corwin (just go with it, it can get complicated). He rescues a version of Lancelot from weird cat demons, and then finds a castle run by Ganelon, a man who used to be one of Corwin's chief lieutenants in Avalon until he betrayed his lord and was exiled. Recovering his strength in Lorraine, he meets and forms a relationship with a woman named Lorraine, earns Ganelon's trust, and helps lead their armies against hideous demons who are pouring out of an expanding zone of Chaos. This is Corwin's fault, because of the heavy curse he laid on his brother Eric in the first book.


Lorraine (the realm) is saved, but Lorraine (the woman) is lost, and Corwin avenges her in a brief but moving scene, then he and Ganelon travel to Avalon, only to find Corwin's long-lost and presumed dead brother Benedict acting as its protector against a Chaos incursion. The brothers are cordial, but Benedict wants no upheaval in Amber, so Corwin watches what he says around him. Corwin also meets Dara, a beautiful young woman who identifies herself as Benedict's granddaughter who takes an intimate interest in Corwin.

Corwin gets his army and his arsenal, and travels back to Amber, only to find it under siege from the forces of Chaos.

The book starts out extremely strong by dialing things back to Corwin getting involved in a smaller-scale conflict. It helps his conscience grow more and gives the reader glimpses into his more tyrannical past. Ganelon did him wrong, but his punishment was enormously petty. The doomed relationship with the camp follower/seer Lorraine is also touching, and Corwin swinging his silver sword Grayswandir against weird goat-headed demons never gets old.


Then it slows down a lot after the reunion with Benedict. Dara is interesting and mysterious, but its mostly talking, then Corwin walking through shadows until he gets to a couple places he needs to go. Shadow walking is cool, but it doesn't need to be described in detail every single time.

Then it picks right back up again when Corwin and Ganelon leave Avalon and are chased by a righteously furious Benedict. Benedict is the Master of Arms of Amber, and even with an amputated hand, he's still the best swordsman in the family and Corwin is absolutely terrified of having to fight him. From there, its a rocket ride to the finish, where Corwin's feud with Eric takes an abrupt turn and Dara turns out to be more than just a granddaughter.


The prose remains solid, but I felt the middle of the book dragged itself down. However, the beginning and ending are as strong as anything in Nine Princes, maybe even more so with the climax. If you've read the first book, I recommend the second.

1 comment:

Misha Burnett said...

"The Guns Of Avalon" is my favorite of the Amber novels. The rest of the series tends to bog down even more in the two things you mention, descriptions of shadow walking and talking heads, as well as big chucks of "the story so far" exposition.

"Sign Of The Unicorn", "Hand Of Oberon" and "Courts of Chaos", in my opinion, could have been edited together into one book without losing much in the way of story.

I still love the series and revisit it regularly (and I'll admit that I love the Merlin books, too, although they fall into the same pattern). Still there are parts in the latter books in both series that I tend to skip when rereading.